She stands within her laden thoughts.
A moment of distress.
The quiet darkness wraps around her.
A comforting cloak.
Eyes closed.
She takes a breath.
Shaky and unsure.
One step to cross a threshold.
One step to free her mind.
A whisper passes by her lips.
"Let go."
With a final gasp.
She dissolved her thoughts.
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Mr.Knowitall.
I didn't have time to post a flash today but thought I'd stop in to say hello. Glad to see you're following up on another one.
ReplyDeleteA moment of distressed disolved. We could all use one of those....methinks.
Nice job. Have a writing-laden weekend!
nice...great 55...that step can be the hardest to make but oh what the rewards...have a great weekend
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You are a very talented writer
Thanks for playing, and have a kick Ass Week End
Fantastic 55!
ReplyDeleteMuch to enjoy and reflect on here.
ReplyDeleteLove it! Wow!
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